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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-19 21:03:46 | I'll do anything | Okay, let's see the follow-up. Nicely done. Good and erotic. 8/10 |
| 2005-12-20 05:10:03 | I'll do anything | come on mate were is the next one. 9/10 |
| 2005-12-20 18:15:21 | I'll do anything | He better fuck her brains out, and if he even uses a condom in this story, and doesnt nut inside of her, i will KILL YOU! |
| 2005-12-20 19:06:33 | I'll do anything | wdf this has got 7.85 rating... im not even gonna bother fucking reading it... 1 its too bloody short... 2. there is no bloody storyline, and 3. you need more detail and to make the beginning longer... dont even make a another follow up of this... this needs be re-made! its shit! |
| 2005-12-20 23:25:42 | I'll do anything | Yeah, I agree. The storyline was non-existent, you stlye of writing isn't good (no offence), and it was too short. Work on it. |