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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-23 02:15:16 | I'll do anything | Wow this was a fucking stupid story. You incest creeps need to crawl out from your parents basement and take a fucking shower. Throw out the Dungeons and Dragons cards and leave the fuckign house so that you might have some wack-off material that isn't related to you. All of you fags make me sick. |
| 2005-12-23 02:35:59 | I'll do anything | I could not have been more bored throughout this entire story. 1/10 |
| 2005-12-23 19:10:35 | I'll do anything | not bad for a starter. need a little more detail in it. give it a 7 |
| 2005-12-24 04:36:28 | I'll do anything | i only caught a few grammer mistakes try using microsoft word and use spell check over all a good story too short for its own good make it longer . if u keep it to short the reader loses attention. oh and must i remeber why get his sister to do it?whynot tell her to get one of her friends jsut try and stay away from incest. other then that not bad |
| 2005-12-24 07:38:33 | I'll do anything | Nice story.... I have to agree with madmann... keep tring...i look forward to reading more... |