| 2005-12-24 15:22:06 |
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I really liked the story. I would love for you to write a follow up, and I agree with others that you should make it longer. I hope you understand from this that you should add more detail, not just add action. Great start! |
| 2005-12-26 04:46:00 |
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Encore man, you gotta come up with part 2, almost reminded me of my first time, only it wasnt my sister, it was her girlfriend |
| 2005-12-26 06:19:19 |
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great wright part 2 |
| 2005-12-26 13:31:40 |
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a bit lame, but we need part 2 |
| 2005-12-26 18:08:51 |
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very unpractical, please take it off the site |