| 2006-01-24 00:29:54 |
Black Lace_(0)
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I'm really dissappointed in the reaction I'm getting from readers here. So, if you're going to vote 1 or 2 or some what not... How about telling me why? I'm curious to hear. |
| 2007-01-22 16:55:52 |
Black Lace_(0)
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you get more fantasy and imagination in your head and you will understand.. i think it's a good story would like part 2 |
| 2006-01-14 10:39:43 |
she was so young!
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Dont waste your time writing anymore... Didnt enjoy it at all. Grammar was terrible, spelling was rubbish, and it was too rushed. |
| 2006-01-14 11:24:58 |
she was so young!
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difficult to read... not enough paragraphs, i lost the plot before you did, sorry, this was bad. |
| 2006-01-14 13:11:20 |
she was so young!
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use spell check... it had potential... |