| 2006-01-14 17:36:11 |
she was so young!
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GRAMMER SPELL CHECK WHAT THE HELL ITS A SEX STORY TO GET YOU OFF NOT TO WIN A GRAMMER CONTESTS I LIKED IT WRITE MORE |
| 2006-01-14 20:08:09 |
she was so young!
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slow down take your time and use spell check other wise the story was good |
| 2006-01-14 20:45:05 |
she was so young!
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Use spell check. Your story was pretty good. You just need to learn how to spell. |
| 2006-01-15 08:29:09 |
she was so young!
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Why don't you start Part 2 with what happened just after the first penrtration, perhaps some gentleness kindness and maybe gratitude to the girl. After all this guy is not described as being much of a catch. Then slow lovemaking on the second session that day. You can either include anal in that or leave that for when you think the girl is emotionally ready depending on the storyline. Carry on please. I am eager to find out what happens next. |
| 2006-01-18 09:20:10 |
she was so young!
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Don't listen to all of those fuck nuts. they're all nothing but a bunch wind bags anyway. i enjoyed the story. write another one soon. |