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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-10-20 18:10:05 | she was so young! | you sick bartard you should have your dick cut off |
| 2006-11-19 09:38:13 | she was so young! | i got lost in the second paragraph....its just to much all at once, try breaking it up but not too much. pararaphs build suspense, making readers think 'o whats going to happen.' people saying spell check are right even if its almost perfect with spelling, well done good storry |
| 2007-01-04 21:19:17 | she was so young! | good story should have raped her though |
| 2008-01-02 17:44:09 | she was so young! | More paragraphs woud be better |
| 2008-01-22 21:44:18 | she was so young! | THAT ROCKED PART 2 |