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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-04-15 07:18:12 | Kelly and Me | fantasy comes from the imagination so what is so wrong with imagining having sex with very young girls and hoping or wishing it was true. nothing wrong with wishing you owned a top of the range car so what's wrong with wishing for underage sex? |
| 2006-02-22 11:29:07 | Ashley The Little Girl... | HEY FOR SOME STRANGE REASON I REALLY LIKED IT' NOW DO ONE WHERE HE MAKES HER EAT PUSSY AND SHE SAYS '' BUT I DON'T EAT PUSSY'' AND THEN AFTER SHE EAT'S SOME SHE GETS ADDICTED TO IT |
| 2006-02-22 13:38:39 | Ashley The Little Girl... | Good story, very different from most on here, well done on something original and erotic |
| 2006-02-22 23:51:14 | Ashley The Little Girl... | It started off pretty well but when you started typing with one hand the writing started to suffer. married four years at 19? and he thought she would be difficult. I got the feeling you were trying to script one of the many pornsite scenarios. How do you explain us being able to read her mind from his point of view? the originality is a plus but the execution is lacking. two other things, get rid of the vocalizations (this is not a peanuts comic) and it is spelled t-o-n-g-u-e. Keep trying |
| 2006-02-23 05:17:07 | Ashley The Little Girl... | she was with her husband 4 years (not married 4 years). it is a pornsite senario dumb ass!!! She told him later what she was thinking...for the part of readinig his mind or his point of view...and there is more than one miss spelled word fuck head why pick out one? Nothing wrong with your judgments just correcting them for you...Maybe you should think about how stories evolve...do you read them to read them or do you read them to critisize everything..I can handle honest opions, but you're just wacked...Peace man and thanks sky_tulor @ hot mail . com |