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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-02-26 06:09:17 | Ashley The Little Girl... | I don't think that she would give in that fast, plus once I started doing the math, (married 4 years and 19), I lost interest. |
| 2006-02-27 06:32:32 | Ashley The Little Girl... | Hey that was awesome dude. you should make a really hardcore story I bet that you would be good at it? And does the guy invite ashley over sometime. what happens. Oh by the way I agree on your comment about archan. It wasn't really that hard to make that she wasn't married for years. don't worry about that asshole he does the same thing to everybodys story! Good luck with all those stories new writer. I'm waiting. you're different and unique!! |
| 2006-02-28 23:29:41 | Ashley The Little Girl... | No 'reader', I only comment stories I think can be improved. I dont leave posts for crap. This was not crap. it was just not as well crafted as it should have been. ee, you miss the point. if you are going to take the time to sit down and write a story, then post it here for the world to comment on; you should expect comments. I admit I have sharp teeth sometimes, but thats what it takes to get noticed, so be it. People remember the details, sometimes far more then the story. Those details need to be tight. Just because it is a story 'about' porn does not mean it has to sound like porn. Its a good premise, its original, make it as good as it can be. I am a lot of things, a dumb ass is not one of them. Keep writing, get better, get great, prove me wrong, I'll be the first to prais |
| 2006-03-01 02:21:46 | Ashley The Little Girl... | lol...thank you archaic for a better understanding of your comment...all my advise is to you is think before you comment and maybe think of yourself...what does that mean? I'm sure we all know...thank you for the elaboration, greatly appreciated!! And also thank you 'Reader' for your support and agreement! emptyempathy s... @ hot mail . com |
| 2006-03-13 09:30:32 | Ashley The Little Girl... | nice story 10/10 |