| 2006-06-08 13:42:44 |
VampricLust
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nice content but you need to add paragraphs and do a spellcheck before you put it on this website |
| 2006-08-06 20:23:57 |
VampricLust
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don`t worry about what they say, this story was a 10/10 it was awesome do some more it was great |
| 2006-10-02 12:36:35 |
VampricLust
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WOW! about sums it up |
| 2006-11-23 17:18:58 |
VampricLust
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mmmm hot! |
| 2007-01-19 19:52:06 |
VampricLust
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you need to spell check your poiece before posting it. it was pretty good. although it did need a better ending and better grammar. 7/10 |