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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-27 23:28:36 | VampricLust | I think everyone would agree with me that there should be a part 2. I loved this story and that guy sounds really hot!! 10/10 |
| 2007-06-19 23:36:10 | VampricLust | That is a work of art |
| 2007-07-04 23:51:43 | VampricLust | that was hot i want to be rape by a vampire |
| 2007-07-17 12:26:38 | VampricLust | sooooooooo hot wow |
| 2007-08-03 03:10:55 | VampricLust | I'm going to have to agree with so many other readers here. It was a very hottt piece of work, although spell checker would have made it even better and some grammer work is needed. The middle part most definately need more climatic punch to it-and then the end needed to be better thought out and arranged. Keep working and take the constructive feedback to help you grow as a writer. great effort otherwise!! 8/10 |