| 2006-04-11 10:45:40 |
my beautiful younger sister
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not the great story needs some work you need to streach out the begauining you start right in to it to soon |
| 2006-04-11 23:06:05 |
my beautiful younger sister
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ok guys there is going to be an update, instead of a second story i'm just gonna put the second story in this one. it may take a few days to edit it all i hope to have it finished tomorow |
| 2006-04-11 23:11:47 |
my beautiful younger sister
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oh fuck i'm just gonna make part 2 seperately............. i'll work on it tomorow, i'm a bit tired right now |
| 2006-04-12 15:02:53 |
my beautiful younger sister
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needs a lot of work and slow down |
| 2006-04-16 20:53:21 |
my beautiful younger sister
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