| 2006-08-07 12:01:07 |
So Innocent Chapter 1
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yeah 10/10 for me great story loved the pissing part. |
| 2006-09-02 17:09:00 |
So Innocent Chapter 1
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that was gr8 really hot u r a gud wrter even if u dont think so |
| 2006-10-23 21:59:13 |
So Innocent Chapter 1
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it sucked REALLY REALLY BAD |
| 2006-11-05 05:18:24 |
So Innocent Chapter 1
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amazing |
| 2006-11-25 03:42:36 |
So Innocent Chapter 1
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The story ine was great and the whole idea about a first lesbian experience is a timeless classic. The only problem i see is that there is too much filler and too much cussing. The watersports part was surprisng but kind of expected. I think its natural for both girls to be willing, but the whole pornography tuning on teens is a little too over donr. Other than those a little discrepences a fine story. 8/10 |