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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-12-10 09:42:51 | Road Trip_(8) | verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyy... good |
| 2006-12-10 10:24:36 | Road Trip_(8) | WRITE ANOTHER ONE PLEZZZZZ |
| 2006-12-10 19:40:53 | Road Trip_(8) | Great bring on the rest!!!!!! |
| 2006-12-10 21:54:00 | Road Trip_(8) | good strory coulda been longer, 9/10 make it longer |
| 2006-12-10 22:26:59 | Road Trip_(8) | great story and idea, couple of things though; careful with your paragraph spacings: and watch your spelling - try writing the story in word, then copying it across, that should sort out most of the errors. other than than - very nice! |