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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-09 12:28:10 | The Awakening of a Slut: Samantha | I think Doc doesn't understand the complexity of female sexuality and the courage it takes to give voice to certain fantasies. Good for you, Samantha. You've expressed what I've never had the courage to. Janice |
| 2006-08-15 22:33:38 | The Awakening of a Slut: Samantha | Samantha, I loved your highly erotic and well written story. Please don;t feel that you have to dumb it down for 18-20 year olds, or people like doc. I certainly had no trouble understanding it. |
| 2006-08-29 19:05:27 | The Awakening of a Slut: Samantha | Be careful what you wish for, Samantha! you wanted comments. this is dreadful, probably in my top 10 of worst reads ever. i did try reading this when it originally posted, but stopped after the first few lines of neverending cliches. I don't understand why the story switched from first person narrative to third person. also, it doesn't flow very well. it's choppy writing. You would benefit from taking advice and a few writing classes. Keep writing, though. 4/10 |
| 2006-09-04 19:53:12 | The Awakening of a Slut: Samantha | Was a little hard for me to understand sometimes I think the third person kind of throwed me |
| 2006-07-03 03:23:32 | Samantha the Slut...four years later | Excellent, very senusal and hard at the same time |