| 2006-12-30 13:58:19 |
REVENGE OF THE COCK TEASE
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wat the fucking bad story.starting was very nice but ended with bullshit |
| 2007-05-06 20:11:00 |
REVENGE OF THE COCK TEASE
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not bad |
| 2007-07-09 10:51:19 |
REVENGE OF THE COCK TEASE
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OK the story idea was great, but it was a little confused about who was going what when. You need to re-read it and mork out the kinks and add some more detail and you will have one fantastic story. |
| 2006-07-01 10:21:27 |
Her Very Bad Dog!
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not bad has potential |
| 2006-07-01 12:38:43 |
Her Very Bad Dog!
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"220 lb. beast"!!! with a 12 inch cock. Honey, either you got the it wrong about the breed or that hound was the largest german shepard who's ever lived. |