| 2007-11-26 02:10:35 |
Wishes Fulfilled
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ok you got your characters mixed alot mostly jean and carol and jane even though jane wasnt even in the story you also copy pasted a section on accident please proofread |
| 2007-12-02 03:03:24 |
Wishes Fulfilled
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omg |
| 2008-01-29 23:36:36 |
Wishes Fulfilled
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Not too bad. Except for a few errors and one reader already posted about the copy paste. I Haven't made my way through all of it yet. |
| 2006-07-01 10:04:51 |
REVENGE OF THE COCK TEASE
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Nice fuck - even nicer font - how you do that? |
| 2006-07-02 00:47:42 |
REVENGE OF THE COCK TEASE
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The Story box uses html code so you put in what you want to write in bold |