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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-01-21 18:04:03 | Her Very Bad Dog! | great story. a former girlfriend lost her cherry to the family dog. unpleasent to say the least-the first time after that he became her fulltime lover |
| 2007-03-30 21:13:14 | Her Very Bad Dog! | Good story and keep writing. I only have few suggestionsquestions: One, 220 pounds is one huge dog that would be abnormally large for a Saint Bernard or Mastiff much less a German Shepherd. Keep in mind bread to weight ratio or just call it a giant shepherd looking mutt. Mutts are easy ways out. Second, how did dog get door open? What kind of door knob? Great opportunity for suspense if you have the scratching wake her and then as she cowers in fear the dog opens the door. And last I’m curious if her father is a cop why does he have to go to London for business? With all that said I really liked it and eagerly await more stories especially a sequel. |
| 2007-05-12 01:35:59 | Her Very Bad Dog! | This was a great story, I have read plenty of first time writers and by fare you are the best at this point. dont let people influence you 2 much on what to write about in your second part, just let it take you where it goes. the last person to comment sums up the problems in this Ch. have fun with it! |
| 2007-11-07 19:46:23 | Her Very Bad Dog! | Is this even possible? To be raped by an animal? |
| 2007-12-04 17:16:33 | Her Very Bad Dog! | dont know, dont care. 10/10 |