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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-12-10 19:05:23 | Meeting You | you are fuckin retarded. this story is horrible and there is no description whatsoever. you think that just throwing out sensual words makes a good story? would be a 0/10 but 1/10 is the lowest i can give! |
| 2008-01-05 04:42:55 | Meeting You | To the moron who's ok with the lousy grammar and spelling.... You'll end up with her mental twin... who'll end up fucking all your friends, while you're working to support her and their kids. |
| 2006-07-02 07:42:56 | Cassy's Farm Adventures | makes ur cock throb Great I cummed 90 times on ma keyboard |
| 2006-07-02 16:39:37 | Cassy's Farm Adventures | please put it and any other stories you write in past tense rather than a third-person first tense - it will make it easier to read! Otherwise great story! |
| 2006-07-03 10:24:32 | Cassy's Farm Adventures | Pretty good. A little overdone in some places but not much. You guys should go back through the dialogue again and tighten it up a bit. The story is strong, well crafted and entertaining. It is still a bit rough though. As far as the tense goes, just be consistant. Keep writing, stories like this are always welcome. |