| 2006-07-03 03:20:46 |
Night Crawling
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Excellent story! Great pacing - excellent writing skills. Keep it up and bring him back to fuck her again! |
| 2006-07-03 04:42:56 |
Night Crawling
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Wow, thanks guys... Um, not sure about the sequel... The plot is so embarrassingly simple and dumb that I have no idea how possibly I could extend it... As for her being 50, she is 52 actually and is a real life person so, the age was very intentional. Too bad you like 'em younger, daddylong... |
| 2006-07-03 10:45:49 |
Night Crawling
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Well written, excellent descriptions, great pace. Outstanding pace. I am not much into the subject matter but well done is well done. Hopefully, the haters will let you float for a few more days before they torpedo this little slice of craftsmanship. Keep writing. |
| 2006-07-03 16:26:38 |
Night Crawling
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brilliant more please |
| 2006-07-04 03:29:14 |
Night Crawling
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Oh, thank you, thank you... Why would anyone want to torpedo this story is frankly beyond my imagination since it's such a small, dumb, unambitious piece of no-brain writing but let everyone do what they please... |