| 2006-07-05 17:21:34 |
Rye and Eli
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Great story,shot my pussy juice all over. More |
| 2006-07-05 18:56:57 |
Rye and Eli
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DAMN 18 and so good at composing sweet heavens you are gonna go places 10/10 |
| 2006-07-05 19:02:44 |
Rye and Eli
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fucking check ur grammar and stop repeating urself. it sucked. u faggot dildo. |
| 2006-07-05 23:21:43 |
Rye and Eli
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you below me you suk ass this story was written very well the grammer is fine i didn't notice anything wrong with it all all if you think its to bad why dont you write a story you piece of shit |
| 2006-07-06 02:34:06 |
Rye and Eli
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Grammar Sucked, Retarded Emoticons All Over The Story, The Intraspective Third Person Was Shit. The Only Good Part Was That It Ended |