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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2006-07-06 05:39:51 | Rye and Eli | Great Story those that have rated it bad are fucking stupid and dont know what there talkings about. Keep up the good work!!! |
2006-07-06 10:17:42 | Rye and Eli | great story-more pleeez! |
2006-07-06 15:41:25 | Rye and Eli | 9. I don't understand why u used a period and a colon at the end of every sentence? rudcurious one |
2006-07-06 18:50:28 | Rye and Eli | Pretty good. It really needed a few more edits, but the central content is top notch. Keep writing, you might be able to make a buck. |
2006-07-07 00:33:41 | Rye and Eli | Nothing exceptional, too cheesy and needs more context... Way too long and redundant for nothing. 7/10 |