| 2006-12-17 15:45:11 |
Rye and Eli
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nice story. I like how they made love and not just sex. Women need some lovin' too! |
| 2006-12-19 09:05:33 |
Rye and Eli
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This story was absolutely FANTASTIC ! keep up the good work ! you made my pussy fuckin' wet i came twice thanks to this ! great job ! |
| 2006-12-21 03:16:10 |
Rye and Eli
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average |
| 2006-12-24 09:16:49 |
Rye and Eli
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my COD?proofreading would help,other than grammer mistakes GREAT story.more on the way?PLEEZ 9/10 |
| 2006-12-27 02:35:54 |
Rye and Eli
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Story had a great theme, but the descrriptions were written in a herky-jerky manner making the reading of same a great distraction. Wrter did a pretty good job describing their inner feelings created by good sex. Could be substantially improved through better writing and proof-reading. |