| 2007-01-04 20:44:47 |
Rye and Eli
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MY COD!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS ONE HELL OF ROMANCE, GOOD WRITING, DUDE. WAITING FOR ANOTHER ONE, BUT DONT WRITE PART 2, THIS STORY IS PURFECT AS IT IS :) |
| 2007-01-04 21:32:57 |
Rye and Eli
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this story reminds me of me n my ex, i fought for a second someone must of been spyin on us :) ..... anywya, good storryyyy |
| 2007-01-06 18:11:14 |
Rye and Eli
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Good story, but needs a little work. Don't fret. Yo've got the talent. You'll get better and better with each effort. 7/10. I'm the Dick Slapper. |
| 2007-01-08 00:12:18 |
Rye and Eli
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ddddddddaaaammmmn good strory very sexy |
| 2007-02-12 10:29:31 |
Rye and Eli
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ver |