sexstories.com
Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-07-20 13:37:25 | End of the world - Chapter 6 | I know its how to continue from here. esp if you want to keep the story interesting. you have my support all the way. hope to be able to read part 7 soon. |
| 2006-07-21 02:48:27 | End of the world - Chapter 6 | Well, this has been one of the best series of stories I've really enjoyed whole heartedly. Hope this isn't the last chapter yer. |
| 2006-07-21 12:45:42 | End of the world - Chapter 6 | i can't lie, this one was probably the best yet. keep them coming, but take your time. you set the bar pretty high for yourself, and this story could go on for a very long time now with the next generation. |
| 2006-07-21 16:08:30 | End of the world - Chapter 6 | man i love these storyies im so worried about whats wrong with karen i reallly love thes stories keep them cumming nadez |
| 2006-07-24 03:58:14 | End of the world - Chapter 6 | When Mary convinced Dan to have sex with him, she accused him of not believing her to be beautiful enough to have sex with. Congratulations; you've created a post-apocalyptic society that retains an obsession with physical perfection despite the pragmatic nature of sex in it. Making as many children as possible as quickly as possible wasn't such a great idea. In about two or three years, the boys are going to start getting ideas about independance, and if sex is the binding of this micro society, those boys are going to start treating their sexual contacts as acts of authority. I don't even want to think about the rivalries that could happen. Other than basic premise issues, I only had a problem with the changes of point-of-view in the first section. It was confusing. |