| 2006-07-30 04:53:49 |
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You have created a story that makes many others on this site look like actual bullshit. you should add some lesbian, due to the fact that you have implied that there are more girls than guys. Maybe you should add anal or groups in the next couple of chapters. your spellinggrammar has improved greatly since the first chapter and you haave kept the descriptions of the sex involed fresh, which is not easy to do. great work you could make make millions selling this series as an erotic novel. However, I still think you should post it on this site. If you made it into a book i'd buy it |
| 2006-07-30 19:46:16 |
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fuck man the last reader is right this is one of the 2 best seris on here you fucking rock |
| 2006-08-11 04:02:00 |
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Good shit. |
| 2006-08-15 23:10:05 |
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dafvafv |
| 2006-08-23 16:46:03 |
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omg its been so long since ive read 1 of your amazing stories but i am so satifised you r the shit i have no idea how you do this but WOW u can almost make a girl oum with just reading this stuff (which i almost did) any way keep up the awesome work but slowly so you can think up as much magik as you want!!! peace out a- town down |