| 2008-03-15 15:46:42 |
Dirty sarah
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8/10 |
| 2006-07-14 14:10:10 |
Tarika Trapping Us
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what horrible language! take an english course pleaseeeeeeeee!!!! |
| 2006-07-14 14:11:33 |
Tarika Trapping Us
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a fourth grader has better control of the english language than you |
| 2006-07-14 22:34:19 |
Tarika Trapping Us
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The theme has good possibilities, but I would suggest that you ask someone to edit your story before you post it |
| 2006-07-15 05:06:19 |
Tarika Trapping Us
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good idea fo the story, but as I am guessing that English is not your first language I would advise getting someone to check your story before posting. |