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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-07-14 08:46:15 | Cold & Hot | It had good grammar and you could follow along. It was pretty much just sex, but that's good for some people so I can't critize that. |
| 2006-07-14 10:52:39 | Cold & Hot | easy enough to read...was rushed somewhat ... |
| 2006-07-14 12:44:58 | Cold & Hot | well done wite some more it was great but a little rushed . |
| 2006-07-14 16:39:00 | Cold & Hot | ***twstd&dmntd4lfe*** bck@,you peeps,again........ most people,are saying ---> {slightly rushed}.. i'm not,that nice..dude => you,ROYALLY FUCKED UP,THIS PERFECT STORY,BY RUSHING,WAY TO FUCKING FAST!!!!!!!!!!! ((P.S.)) ~~~> male/""female teens _> more,than,one:woman""..you ROYALLY,FUCKED UP, THERE,too & i'm,thee only one,to catch that |
| 2006-07-14 20:26:08 | Cold & Hot | Give it up old timer......find another hobby because you cannot write. |