2006-07-15 00:47:14 |
My slutty ex
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Not bad in terms of story properties, but sucked a fat nut in grammar. The word is "of" not "off" Learn a bit more grammar and you'll have this down |
2006-07-15 04:22:11 |
My slutty ex
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dude it was adequate....FIX THE DAMN GRAMMAR AND PUCTUATION! goddamit man, fucking hard to read! |
2006-07-15 04:47:52 |
My slutty ex
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I love the sound descriptions, nice. |
2007-08-22 22:31:02 |
My slutty ex
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tht was fuckin awesome im so horny now i need someone to fuck ME now!!!!! i think i cummed 5 times while readin the whole thing also fuckin my pillow!!!! |
2006-07-17 05:19:38 |
LAILANI'S RICH DICK EXPERIENCE
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TRIPE! |