| 2006-07-20 09:28:04 |
Everwood
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fuck...please make a part two |
| 2006-07-20 18:09:46 |
Everwood
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first thing write ch 2 maybe ch3 the story was awesome an somewhat well written the ending sucked willie t |
| 2006-07-20 23:53:13 |
Everwood
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The pace was a little frantic, and the ending was abrupt. Let these activities develop more naturally on their own. Her giving her brother head suddenly at the dinner table is a little bit of a stretch. |
| 2006-07-21 04:18:12 |
Everwood
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good story went a little fast at the end leaving the other couple out of it |
| 2006-07-24 03:10:29 |
Everwood
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Rather poor. No substance and much too fast. |