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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-07-19 06:20:09 | My first time and his dad | The bold type is hard to read,, I quit after the first few lines.. |
| 2006-07-19 07:09:28 | My first time and his dad | loved it more pleaseeeeeeeeee. 10/10 red |
| 2006-07-19 09:25:00 | My first time and his dad | don't like the rough stuff. could have been more natural. |
| 2006-07-19 10:04:17 | My first time and his dad | I THOUGHT IT WAS GOOD BUT NOW THAT THE DAD HAS THE LITTLE SLUT JUST WHERE HE WANTS HER' NOW HE SHOULD MAKE HER DO HIS BIDDING AND HELP HIM SEDUCE ALL OF HER LITTLE GIRLFRIENDS' BY INVITING THEM OVER TO SLEEP-OVERS AND POOL PARTIES AND DAD WANTS HER TO HELP HIM SEDUCE HER MOM AND HER MOTHERS BUSTY SISTER |
| 2006-07-19 14:22:14 | My first time and his dad | I thing you could use a coure in sentence structure and punctuation. Story line ok, but needs expanded. |