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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-07-19 16:47:55 | The Pet - part 5 - Debbie gets some special treatment | Don't you just hate it when people anonymously crticise work. Keep this serial going please. |
| 2006-07-20 03:51:51 | The Pet - part 5 - Debbie gets some special treatment | It was good, but too shot. You need to expand. Don't leave your readers hanging so soon. Not to montion, you made us wait all that time for something that was barely a turn on. get to the good stuff already! What about the huge dildoes and such? fuck em up, but be a little less gross about it. quit making them eat shit and drink piss. That's been done through most of this serise. move on to a little more internal tourture like a 15" long 3" wide super vibrator. LIke I said, it's good, but you need more of a subject line. Keep your readers interested. I'm sorry, but this was too much of a tease. give us more next time |
| 2006-08-22 13:26:04 | The Pet - part 5 - Debbie gets some special treatment | this is another gr8 story. loving the whole serial plz hirry writing the nxt longer episode |
| 2006-08-25 14:07:28 | The Pet - part 5 - Debbie gets some special treatment | Thanks to all who have left comments here. All comments and constructive criticisms are greatly welcomed. I've just started on the next installment (been busy moving house and holidaying!) and will try and break the back of it this weekend. Kim |
| 2006-08-30 01:43:17 | The Pet - part 5 - Debbie gets some special treatment | Longer~ 10/10 |