| 2006-08-02 13:47:50 |
Brittney's Secret lust
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You don't need to waste our time with your bad spelling and grammar. The content was terribly predictable. So... don't bother writing more. Thanks for the offer, though. |
| 2006-08-02 19:51:07 |
Brittney's Secret lust
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there was some bad spelling, but who gives a shit??? great story. i cant wait to read the 2nd part |
| 2006-08-02 23:10:52 |
Brittney's Secret lust
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learn to spell |
| 2006-08-03 00:25:38 |
Brittney's Secret lust
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awesome story |
| 2006-08-03 15:00:55 |
Brittney's Secret lust
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why bother with spelling the ppl readig these stories are obviously not in it for pleasure but more to critique and if so they can do tat with somebody eolse writing. |