| 2006-09-21 00:29:29 |
The revenge of Micheal
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spell check , go back to school |
| 2006-11-26 22:40:07 |
The revenge of Micheal
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my eyes are burning god! |
| 2007-03-03 02:53:20 |
The revenge of Micheal
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I couldn't even finish the story because the grammar and spelling was so bad. The story it self wasn't even all that great. It had no story line really and it jumped all over the place. Practice on your grammar and writing skills before you write another one please. |
| 2007-06-17 18:54:51 |
The revenge of Micheal
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Your spelling stinks! 5/10 |
| 2007-06-17 18:59:21 |
The revenge of Micheal
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This story had so much potential, but your writing sucks, your style sucks, your spelling sucks, the story was too short and lacking in detail and YOU suck, BITCH! 3/10. |