| 2006-08-13 13:32:28 |
The revenge of Micheal
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my eyes hurt from trying to read it, maybe if you got someone to proof read it maybe it wouldnt be so bad, but please no more writing |
| 2006-08-13 16:21:40 |
The revenge of Micheal
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It would be a good story if you reread it, and spelled everything right. But you tried. |
| 2006-08-13 17:07:55 |
The revenge of Micheal
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It is obvious you had trouble spelling, but I encourage you to continue writing because the more you do something the better you get at doing it. Good luck to you. dw |
| 2006-08-13 17:27:27 |
The revenge of Micheal
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Ok.. I love it when the people criticizing spelling can't even spell, refer to , "Ur right u r a fucking nerd u caint spell worth shit and ur a slut on top of that bitch "..... can't does not have an "i" in it. |
| 2006-08-13 19:03:00 |
The revenge of Micheal
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good plot. but the UBER shit spelling lets you doen big time. Re-write it it after going through spell check. I only got to line 5 before my brain melted. |