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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-14 00:41:28 | The revenge of Micheal | i apologize for the people who told you to stop writing. they are assholes. keep trying, keep writing . . . readers should never discourage a writer. |
| 2006-08-14 13:58:06 | The revenge of Micheal | all i can say is don't sop writing, just use other stories as examples and proof read. - spelling -grammar - tense - description fix that and it'll be fine |
| 2006-08-14 14:21:39 | The revenge of Micheal | that hurt my brain |
| 2006-08-14 18:14:03 | The revenge of Micheal | just spell check it and ur good to go |
| 2006-08-15 00:15:16 | The revenge of Micheal | honestly it doesn't sound like english is your first...or second...maybe not even third language lol. sorry that may sound slightly harsh but uh...can you understand what you have written?...i mean honestly i read one paragraph and i seriously couldnt stand it. i was wondering why it only got like a 3/10 and now i understand. but seriously you need to learn how to like set up a story im thinking cuz this seriously is screwed up. you are the school nerd and have no friends...but your hot? thats not really how school works. whatever i guess...just figure out what your trying to say before you type random shit. it could have been an ok read but the spelling errors and such were just...attrocious. terrible, whatever you wanna call it. bust out a dictionary for ur next story or somethin |