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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-05 02:41:07 | Magic Wands (so to speak) parts 1, 2, and 3 | The spelling was not so good. Needs better breaks. I really can't complaine because I could not do nearly as well. The characters were believable. I personaly would love to read more. |
| 2006-08-05 06:35:18 | Magic Wands (so to speak) parts 1, 2, and 3 | This was Fun! I love the Potter stories and have thought many times that they should be fucking! one thing that caused me some 'pain' was the gender and voice . You made many errors on that alone. I would like very much to read more as you learn your craft. I think you have a future as a writer |
| 2006-08-05 15:00:35 | Magic Wands (so to speak) parts 1, 2, and 3 | hey theses are well good i can't wait to find ou what happens next. please tell me Ron and Hermione stay with each other? this is really good man more more more more |
| 2006-08-06 06:21:56 | Magic Wands (so to speak) parts 1, 2, and 3 | write more 10/10 |
| 2006-08-06 22:45:50 | Magic Wands (so to speak) parts 1, 2, and 3 | dis shit is da best write more 10/10 |