| 2006-08-31 23:49:54 |
Magic Wands (so to speak) parts 1, 2, and 3
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wow very good i must admit, that story had be panting, loved it lots |
| 2006-09-01 13:16:28 |
Magic Wands (so to speak) parts 1, 2, and 3
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GRAMMER and spacing. but otherwise a good story. |
| 2006-09-05 16:52:07 |
Magic Wands (so to speak) parts 1, 2, and 3
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more more great story dude keep it up i can't wait for number 4 to be releadsed keep it up |
| 2006-09-06 13:39:17 |
Magic Wands (so to speak) parts 1, 2, and 3
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its hard to read without spacing for quotations. fix that, and its a lot better |
| 2006-09-06 23:11:19 |
Magic Wands (so to speak) parts 1, 2, and 3
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sweet |