| 2006-10-24 03:24:11 |
Alice in Training
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Fantastic until the little boy came along |
| 2007-08-13 19:11:06 |
Alice in Training
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wow this is sick you guys need help |
| 2006-08-09 12:31:35 |
The Park in the Dark
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what is this guy on tablets? he should have his computer taken off him or be told never to write again. 2/10 |
| 2006-08-09 20:36:39 |
The Park in the Dark
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That story made absolutely no sense at all. you didn't know where to go with your story line (lines); and I would suggest you enroll in adult education english classes. |
| 2006-08-08 07:41:27 |
End of the world - Chapter 8
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is it ok for the delay, i apprecatate for your comitment pls continue in adding more chapters |