| 2006-08-08 16:42:42 |
End of the world - Chapter 8
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Good way to end it, but I do feel like you pushed the matriarch out of the story. She would have most likely been in a leadership position, maybe not with the sex so much but certainly the decision making. I also wonder, with so many fierce independent women, why he took a bunch of boys on the hunt, I cannot imagine any of them would have been as handy as Terri or Sharons girls. Do not let this come out as critical of the story, it was superb, one of the five best series at the site. Tre Bien, take a well deserved break. . .then get your ass back to work on the next series. Keep writing. |