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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-08 09:01:32 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | again i say you are a fantastic writer. if i where you i would take the sex stuff out of it (at least the detailed stuff) and hae it published. i think it would do well |
| 2006-08-08 09:02:09 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | End it here ....it was fantastic........ |
| 2006-08-08 09:20:46 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Wow, although unwanted, it was a fantastic ending. I can see the last shot of the film: With the camera pulling back, slowly, keeping the grave stone with his name in the left corner we see his son standing and walking away, putting his hat back on, the camera pulling back now to show the family waiting for him with sad smiles but with new hope going towards a new future that he had put into motion all that time ago and now coming to fruition. The camera now slowly moves upwards to reveal a beautiful sunrise and slowly fades to black as we see the family move away. I've loved this story and hung out for each chapter. It wasn't the sex but all that happened around that. Wonderfully told tale. If you ever decide to write another you'll have a loyal reader waiting to read it. Martin WAus |
| 2006-08-08 09:31:18 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | great series, 10/10 on all! |
| 2006-08-08 09:37:50 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | what happend to susan |