| 2006-08-09 19:13:57 |
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wow great story, u seriously need to think of gettin these published, the las part almost got me cryin...lol, i knw its jus a story but u writre so good that it all seems real..like the reality now is all a lie and the reality in ur stories r the truth...lol well great job and kinda sad at the end but good, keep it up |
| 2006-08-09 21:06:16 |
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Hey great story. I would love to see you continue it with a spin off with all the different groups and how the relate to each other. I've got to say I liked the storyline much better than the sex. |
| 2006-08-09 22:02:23 |
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Put a spinoff and everyone will laugh at you. |
| 2006-08-09 22:08:07 |
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you know with this being a sex story site you could pull every bit of the graphic sex stories out and i would still read this. It is awesome. i was quite and happily surprised. i knwo this is also fiction but you wonder how would you react in this situation? i think most would do the same things. it was great and i thank you |
| 2006-08-09 23:21:41 |
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i think i cried |