| 2007-10-09 02:49:41 |
ALICIA'S STORY_(1)
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This is actually a great story. |
| 2007-12-06 20:05:33 |
ALICIA'S STORY_(1)
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was alright. the sex scenes were pretty boring and rushed tho. alot of it seemed rushed. and too much detail about stuff that never mattered. still good but. |
| 2008-04-07 12:15:08 |
ALICIA'S STORY_(1)
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i cried at the end wonderful story! |
| 2006-08-10 12:19:22 |
THE POWERS OF A WOMAN
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Bag of Shit, needs more detail and a better build up to the sex. |
| 2006-08-19 11:46:57 |
THE POWERS OF A WOMAN
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Is there any need for that language? Love to see you do better |