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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-28 22:06:31 | THE POWERS OF A WOMAN | Lol I love how the only people who write stupid ass revuews like that can't write themselves. Not bad at all |
| 2006-10-10 03:22:05 | THE POWERS OF A WOMAN | Maybe it does need a little more detail but it did it for me, Nice. |
| 2006-08-11 12:56:54 | 10 Soldiers- part 3 | I love the concept you started with, and I love this kind of "period piece". But I do agree with other commenters that more attention to paragraphs and spelling, etc. would help it. And I'd think about adding more elements from the Civil War era. For example, where are the slaves, assuming this is a plantation? Or maybe some black Union soldiers. Also, I found myself wondering how old these girls are, and I didn't see that. Maybe I read right past it. |
| 2006-08-11 15:58:59 | 10 Soldiers- part 3 | Great job. Glad you decided to finish it afterall. Like i've said before not my thing really but good job and also, thanks for including paragraphs this time |
| 2006-08-19 13:27:58 | 10 Soldiers- part 3 | great little war story. you could write one for each of the wars. it would make a great collection. |