| 2006-08-11 15:44:40 |
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its 'saw' not 'sore'. |
| 2006-08-11 23:53:27 |
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Grammar notwithstanding, not too bad. Took the unconventional route for an ending at least you sold it on an emotional level. No easy task. 8/10 |
| 2006-08-13 13:32:57 |
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dit is nederlands en dat kune je lekker nie leze |
| 2006-08-14 13:03:35 |
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for all the people who are slagging the story off can u can do any better. i thought it was a good story 9/10 |
| 2006-08-16 03:04:18 |
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Good story. |