| 2006-08-14 11:48:44 |
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very good writing add a little more to Chapter 2 and maybe a little excitment but thats just one opinion |
| 2006-08-20 08:57:34 |
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Waiting for part 2 |
| 2006-08-25 03:59:16 |
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hell yes! |
| 2006-08-25 22:42:54 |
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very nice..love fantasizing..but plz more romantic stuff,touch..smell..music..... contact..feelings!! |
| 2006-08-31 20:27:14 |
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That's definately a cool power. In future parts: could you tell the origin of those power....maybe even include those two perfect women?? |