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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-28 15:45:06 | Vincent and Erin | As others have said, LW, it's a little on the quick side, but you've explained why that is. I think there might have been a little bit more of an air of mystery about the handcuffs. She should let Vincent be a little less sure of her intentions. I'd have been talking to him the whole time, telling him how long I've dreamed of using his cock like this...with him utterly helpless. But it's your story. And the writing was great! Keep going! |
| 2006-12-06 20:14:39 | Vincent and Erin | Better dialogue, longer sex scene(s). Could develop into a pretty good series. Feel free to check my Vengeance series if you ever need ideas. 4/10 with good potential. |
| 2007-06-06 19:54:40 | Vincent and Erin | Checked out your story after reading your thread on the forum. Excellent first story, easy to identify with their relationship. Add more of their background and their friendship, his longing for her, in your sequels. |
| 2006-08-12 09:22:18 | My Best Friend Jake | I wish jake was my bestfriend hot story xx could of been longer |
| 2006-08-13 02:00:23 | My Best Friend Jake | Nice. I am not gay but often fantasize about being with a guy. Mostly the guy is non-specific but sometimes it is a friend of mine. never happened for real though. This was too short. Please continue with the two of them. |