| 2006-08-20 20:55:04 |
Please Nurse, Make me Better
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Fun story, but everything was just too perfect. A small dose of reality could have made it a lot better. |
| 2007-04-11 15:38:44 |
Please Nurse, Make me Better
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this story was good jus a lil fake to me though |
| 2006-08-12 07:35:42 |
Jenny's Induction
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should have been called the FAST RAPE or A QUICK JERK.... |
| 2006-08-12 07:44:18 |
Jenny's Induction
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no lead in, looking for a tool????? what the hell is that. ths seecret book in the lid of a tool box???. lots of adjatives but no emagination |
| 2006-08-12 17:43:28 |
Jenny's Induction
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No Skill To this Storie. |