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2007-03-19 19:10:59 | me&my cousins secret | Listen, mAn. That was horrible. Just plain terrible. I think you need to work on some things. Grammer, puntuation, and story development to name a few. And what is with the fucking fare? You think that it is any better than her piece of shit boyfriend? And buddy, you would have gone to jail. No one just shoots someone, calls the cops to pick up the body, then goes back inside. If you are going to write a story, at least make it somewhat beliveable. |
2007-03-21 22:35:41 | me&my cousins secret | i didn`t understand a shit of this story, it was so fucking messy. |
2007-04-20 13:05:22 | me&my cousins secret | what the fuck i did not understand one dam thing in this story |
2007-04-21 09:53:26 | me&my cousins secret | FUCKIN FOB |
2007-04-21 19:53:15 | me&my cousins secret | i think it was English, but i'm not sure |