sexstories.com
Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-19 20:08:30 | Sometimes I just need cock and lots of it | Hey, Dipshits, it says fiction, that means not real dumbasses. |
| 2006-08-20 06:31:45 | Sometimes I just need cock and lots of it | lol why are some of you even reading stories on this site - ???? fantasy, fiction it means it is not true!!!!!!!!I have an imagination - I suggest some of you use yours :-) |
| 2007-06-12 22:44:01 | Sometimes I just need cock and lots of it | very hot |
| 2006-08-18 22:29:45 | Camping(short) | I don't generally comment on the stories, but felt compelled to do so in this case. The main ideas of your story are quite interesting. However, there are a few areas that you could improve. While other readers will be commenting on your lack of details in the practically nonexistent sex scenes, I am hoping to give you some constructive criticism. First, when you write a story, use a word processing program such as Microsoft Office Word. Use the tools Spell Check AND Grammar Check. These two things alone, will help you to improve your writing. Many of your errors that people will comment on are due to the fact that you are writing using the way words sound and unfortunately, many of the sounds may be correct, but the words are vastly different from what you mean to be using. |
| 2006-08-18 22:41:26 | Camping(short) | Second, after you finish writing the story, take a few minutes to read it to yourself. If you notice that the word choice doesn't look right or doesn't sound right, try to find a word that makes more sense...and example here is your female character had MULTIPLY ORGASMS, not multiple orgasms. Hope this helps you become a better writer. |