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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-19 11:21:49 | Rock Climbing_(1) | " ...his hands held my beasts..." hahahahaha! Seriously, proofread. |
| 2006-08-20 01:46:45 | Rock Climbing_(1) | I just couldn't get into Sarah's head. I kept thinking "this story is about a woman, but its obviously written by a guy." I couldn't finish. |
| 2006-08-20 03:09:08 | Rock Climbing_(1) | Followup: You might want to consider rewriting the story in third person ("she felt") instead of first person ("I felt"). |
| 2006-11-27 09:07:10 | Rock Climbing_(1) | Good storyline .. hopeless spelling! Try putting in word first for a spellcheck!!! good possibilities! :) |
| 2007-04-29 04:58:41 | Rock Climbing_(1) | bad spelling and a bad ending. |